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First Proper Room

by talus14
Sunday, May 17, 2009
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Here is an image of a room that I have started working on , not entirely sure where it is going or if im even creating this in the correct way .

Crits + Advice would really be appreciated thx all :) 

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Can I see a wireframe of the room?

What kind of room is it?

 

You are doing a superb job, the only critic I have is the door is a little flat.

Keep up the good work!

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Here is a screenshot of the Wireframe, im really not sure where to take this model tbf its quite frustrating .

 

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That's looking very nice.  If I were you I'd go for an interior design type of thing.  Try deciding what kind of room you want it to be i.e. study, living room, entry way, etc.  Then, for example if you picked a living room, add a couch, chair, coffee table, TV, some plants or something.  Then of course make a wonderful render! 

Hope that helps.  Looks good so far, I definitely see potential.

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It looks great so far!  If you have trouble deciding on where to go, consider doing a floorplan first before continuing.

I can't wait to see what you do with this next!

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how about leaving it for a while then come back later when you have other ideas? if that's not needed for anything soon, at least you should know that you could work on it on-off, not all in one shot.

how about putting a lamp beside the door? maybe a wall lamp or a floor lamp.